Aww

I do love that little headband you have on; it's very cute for people your age!

Unfortunately this image does lack creativity and an original flair, as the overuse of editing and contrast is too intense and the pose itself is also overused. The contrast on the face is so high that it's hard to tell that there's a nose, making facial features indistinguishable.

The photo may have been more effective with either straight up black and white, or color reduction to just a single color area, such as your eyes (which are dazzling in the image).

I suggest looking up professional models either here on dA or on Google and mimic their poses <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> After all, variety is the spice of life and a variety of poses in your gallery will show that you're capable of doing more than just typical Myspace or Facebook poses :3 Good luck!